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Tomasino

tomasino@bookwyrm.tilde.zone

Joined 2 years, 8 months ago

I love to read and sometimes write. I'm active on fedi mostly as @tomasino@tilde.zone. I've been using Goodreads for the past bajillion years and will try to transition here. I run cosmic.voyage and a bunch of fun projects like @SolarpunkPrompts@podcast.tomasino.org

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Lorianne Karney: Saints and Lovers (Paperback, 2005, PublishAmerica) 4 stars

Review of 'Saints and Lovers' on 'Goodreads'

4 stars

Lorianne Karney has excellent control of her craft. The writing in Saints and Lovers evokes the essence of a journal or even a wandering train-of-thought. You quickly come to realize that despite this style, the story is far from the natural rambling of free-writing. Karney has shaped the story in the guise of a confessional, so personal that at times it crosses into vulgar; yet, underneath this facade beats a singular story being revealed moment-by-moment.

This is not an easy read. It is not a summer read or a beach read or even a sleepy evening read. This book takes patience and care and the occasional back-tracking to re-read the last couple paragraphs when your mind wanders. A wandering mind is tough to avoid, too, because it is essentially what Karney is creating for us on the page.

While elements of the story are viscerally real, so much of the …

Jonathan Renshaw: Dawn of Wonder (Paperback, 2015, CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform) 2 stars

Review of 'Dawn of Wonder' on 'Goodreads'

2 stars

This is a tough book to review. There were so many things going right, but the pacing and structure of the story made it drag for me. Did the book need to be this long? Probably not. I think the segmentation of plots into discrete parts was the ultimate downfall. Had some of these threads interwoven and worked together it would have seemed less episodic, and I would have felt like there was a cohesive story. As it was, I was bored by the end of the book and just waiting for it to wrap up.